suggestions on stuff

you tend not to animate the head moving that well, the eyes seem to stay in place as the guy on teh right who seems to be your firend if that was supposed to be you, has the eyes and mouth stay still on his face. last time i checked i havnt managed to move my head without my eyes and face, not sure if its possible but i can try. also, trymaking the play button larger, i saw the logo above it and clicked it instead of hte paly butotn when i found the play button under it so just make it a bit larger or easier tosee cause it was thinner then the edge on a soda can.

sorry but that wasn't that great

one really in way it wasnt that much of a flash movie, was made and taped from some game you said not making much really your original creation, just your idea, and storyline, not your character or setting since if it was a game most likely its predesigned as a set. Also the sound was horrible i turned my speakers half of the thing up from what it was set to so it was 1/2 of the full volume it can make and it was still hard to hear. Stlye: was 0 with graphics cause the style was from a game still and graphics werent great even if from a game. and hmor to me was none might be for others and really no interactivity being a movie. id suggest not doing a projectl ike this again, try flash movies instead maybe, cause it seemed the only thing done in a flash liek program was your loading screen etc.

lol fucking awesom

you have made random actually funny in a really good way. from birds biting to potatos which bite your arms off to a person being pregnant that people probally think was a guy or at least i thought from voices. But anyway great job, you should continue thinks like this.

great job

an original idea, a great method of makign it work, interesting obstacles, powerups (like pacman one which for the person artxia98 whos review was before mine or on the page showing a review before u click play this game, pacman is used by the arrow keys to move him which after i sat there once or twice not seeing anything with the mouse i realized it when i tested that). otherwise great job, the other 50 lvs u made of this which i havnt reivewed yet but played also came out great, u should try to create a system where u can create ur own levels, or have another version with levels created by users of newgrounds and more of your own since it pretty much to me seems it would pass liek the rest.

needs some improvements

yes it was a good game with a good idea behind it but it seriously could use some improvements. Sometimes the most annoying glitch so far in your game is you press go and the person dies from absolutley nothing or dies hitting the back of the starting thing. other thing is put a music off button and more tracks in that game the one thing was a 2 sec loop it seemed repeating voer and over again, i turned my sound off because there was no sound off button. also at times my ramp once touched the ground and the wheel touched it partly since it went thru the ramp somehow the person died. other times hes landed safley anwd died from nothing and wasnt flipping over but just going fast idk if its over a certain speed you die but it did die after landing at times off of the ramp. plus u can go over the fire loops which you should make look more like a loop not al ine of fire which is what it looks like. hopefully you will read this and actually fix those glitches and update your game.

why do I have a feeling that you voted 5

Its okay for a start but too short and not original, but did you vote 5 on it yourself or not sure if someone else actually voted on it.

great job

was great version of the song, sounded better then in the game version. keep up the good work, ive already used one song that u made for christmas in a flash which got deleted so i probally will use some of ur audio entries if they fit the topic and are great which im sure they all are.